I’m glad to see that Eugene and I are on the same page on the issue of Lithwick’s writing. While we’re on the topic I thought I would add one more oddity about her latest column: the ending. Here it is:
Clearly, critics on the right are hoping to nudge the justice back into the fold with all the unremitting scorn and abuse. Note to Ann Coulter’s breasts: It’s not working.
Again, this is very zippy. It also sneaks in another mention of Ann Coulter’s breasts, which creates the impression (among other things) of a connection between the end and beginning of the piece.
There’s just one problem: Lithwick knows that her statement is false. It is rather hard to believe that Ann Coulter, Tom Parker, and the Wall Street Journal editorial page have unleashed their “unremitting scorn and abuse” against Justice Kennedy with the subjective intent of “nudging” him to vote in a way that they like. Indeed, the entire point of Lithwick’s column is that conservatives have an irrational instinct to lash out and blame Kennedy for everything, no matter what he does. If that’s right, it makes no sense to suggest in the last paragraph that this irrational lashing out is actually an effort to persuade Justice Kennedy to change his votes. Still, the conclusion makes conservatives look silly and mentions breasts. So it stays in.
Anyway, I hope I’m not being too critical. I have enjoyed Lithwick’s writing a great deal in the past, and I know she can be very sharp. But I think a little less zing and a little more effort to be accurate and true would improve her columns considerably.